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May 14, 2013

The Wanted Bride


What if you found out five minutes before you were to walk down the aisle, that your best-friend is pregnant by your fiancé? Everyone is seated in the church, the music is playing and then your best friend turns to you and says, she’s pregnant. What would you do?
In my new book, The Wanted Bride, Valerie Burrows runs out the door jumps into the fiancé’s vintage Corvette to escape. Except the car breaks down in downtown Dallas.  I won’t tell you how Valerie reacts, but there is a reason this book is called The Wanted Bride.  It’s what everyone feels like doing on a really bad day, but doesn’t. Except Valerie has reached the end of her limits and she gets her revenge.
If you like sassy heroines and tales of women who change, then you’ll enjoy The Wanted Bride.  Here’s an excerpt.

 
“I need a one-way ticket to anywhere,” Valerie Burrows commanded the girl behind the bus counter in downtown Dallas. A charred piece of her wedding veil sagged onto her face. Impatiently, she flipped the singed lace away, her throat closing off the tears that threatened her vision.
On what was supposed to be the happiest day of her life, she reeked of smoke, not flowers, saw red not white, tasted bile not cake.
Glancing up from the counter the clerk’s eyes widened, making Valerie acutely aware of her appearance. On what was supposed to be the happiest day of her life, she felt traumatized, not joyous.
“Whe...re do you want to go?” the clerk stammered.
“Anywhere, as long as I leave in the next five minutes,” Valerie insisted, wishing people would stop staring. So she looked like a crazy woman. After this morning maybe she was a little loco.
“The bus to Amarillo is loading now,” the agent advised, her large brown eyes riveted to Valerie. “I have one seat left. The one-way fare is sixty-five dollars.”
Though she preferred to travel by plane, there was no time or way to get to the airport. She could take the bus or stay and face the consequences of her actions.
Valerie dug the cash out of her Bottega Veneta purse and handed the money to the ticket agent. “I’ll take it.”
Dirty lace from her wedding veil fell onto her face again, so she yanked the offending garment off her head and threw the veil on top of her matching Louis Vuitton luggage.
The beautiful lace of her Vera Wang wedding gown was streaked with gray and black.
Burn streaks made a crazy pattern on the silk that didn't accessorize the seed pearls.
The clerk handed her the ticket, sympathy in her dark eyes. “The bus is ready. You’re the last one to board.”
Not even time to change. Head held high, spine locked in place, she limped to the white steel carriage, her suitcases trailing behind.
She glanced up to see faces pressed against the glass windows of the bus, gaping at her like she was a freak show.
Hadn’t these people ever seen a runaway bride in real life before? Julia Roberts may have made the movie, but she didn’t own the copyright to wedding disasters.
With her carry-on bag hanging from her shoulder, Valerie marched up the steps of the waiting bus as if she walked around in a wedding gown every day. The babble of sixty voices ceased as she handed the driver her ticket.
He mumbled, “Lord, I need to retire.”
Her silk dress pressed against her legs and swished as she made her way to the only empty seat on her getaway bus. Thank God she’d ditched the petticoats in the Corvette.  A gray-haired woman glanced at her as she put her luggage in the overhead bin.
“Hm hm hm, I can’t wait to hear this story,” the elderly Hispanic woman said.
“Are you all right?”
Valerie plopped in the seat, her ruined silk gown making a mighty swish. She exhaled loudly, her heart aching, her eyes blurring with unshed tears. For the last hour she’d been holding her breath while making her escape.
But now, now all the pain she'd carefully controlled broke free and she chuckled. Hysterical laughter rumbled from deep inside her, echoed through the bus. A single tear rolled down her cheek.
“I am now.”


The Wanted Bride
is currently available on Amazon
http://www.amazon.com/The-Wanted-Bride-ebook/dp/B00CF9F6G2
Barnes & Noble
http://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/the-wanted-bride-sylvia-mcdaniel/1115150522
Ibooks, Smashwords and Kobo. Everyone who leaves a message will be entered into a drawing and I will give away one free copy of The Wanted Bride.

12 comments:

Kimberly Hill said...

I LOVED THIS BOOK!!!! Sylvia you are awesome!

VICKI BATMAN, said...

Sylvia! What an awesome excerpt and LOVE the cover. Congratulations on this one.

Kathleen Baldwin said...

What a fun excerpt! Nice writing. Way to go Sylvia!

It sounds so fun.

Barbara Edwards said...

You had me hooked with this. Looking forward to reading it.

Sylvia said...

Hi Kim!
Thanks so much for your kind comments. I really appreciate everything you do for me.
Sylvia

Sylvia said...

Hi Vicki,
I loved this book it was so much fun and my cover artist was great. Can't wait for RomCon.
Sylvia

Sylvia said...

Hi Kat,
Didn't I have a fabulous cover artist?
Sylvia

Sylvia said...

Hi Barbara,
Thank you so much! This one was fun. I had a great time writing it.
Hope you enjoy.
Sylvia

rojo13864 said...

I loved the excerpt and it sounds wonderful!

Sylvia said...

Hi Rojo,
I had a lot of fun writing this book.
Sylvia

Kimberly Hill said...

You are welcome Sylvia! :) Thank you for what you do!

Yvonne Simpkins said...

Can't wait to read your book.